Do something!

It was my writting and my teacher corrected it for me.

I admire the auther of Harry Potter. I would like to be talented like her. she has created an amazing novel. And it has became a film and not only one film! I was attracted by the film and was engaged to read the novel, but it's translated into chinese. Some sincere readers say, you should read the English version. I agree that, I should read the English version. And my friend who is from Hong Kong, is reading the series 1, she said she has to spend 20 minutes to read only one page, because she has to chenk the vocabulary!